Some thoughts I have require several levels of iteration before they manage full coherence.
I iterate here, so if I'm being confusing to you, wait a couple days and a clearer version of what I'm on about often appears.
But what happened recently isn't really from what I said, but how they read it.
I know what I was thinking, and it's obvious my text didn't match, but what they were replying to didn't match my thoughts or my text.
They read the first half of one line and wrote a paragraph of frothing hate on something that actually got explained a couple lines later... if they'd bothered to read it.
Another side tone is that they seem to think that I owe them the respect they think they're due. Nope. Don't owe you nothin'. This ice cream is free.
I know what they earned here being critical of my words. Contempt.
Wanna bet not a single one of them will come back and read the third iteration of what I was trying to say and apologize?
I am TRYING to be a better writer.
I am TRYING to be clearer in what I write.
But those are internal, personal, goals.
Feedback does help be figure out what I'm doing wrong, but, as the posting rules say, "Don't be a dick."
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